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Get some more layers in there. The lead works, so does the bass synth. Maybe make that bass synth a little more warmer or fatter. 2:15, your lead continues and stays the same volume as before, im glad this is like this, the compression works. Dude WTF @ 2:38 wow, this should have been the song. The change at 3:00 was cool, but it wasn't dramatic enough for me, something needs to be removed that was in the part before. Drums are ok but could be better, louder in spirit (lol) Lose the sirens so much and work with 2:38, i think you have something there. Started as 5/10, then moved to 7/10 at 2:38 - maybe make the beginning catchy so you dont lose the listener, they would never be able to hear 2:38 and that is a crime.