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Intro 0:00 - 0:27 needs some different shit in there, make it catchy so I want to hear the rest
The beat after this part is weak imo, I need something more dramatic
1:09 lead is pretty cool, maybe with said dramatic beat would sound more badass
1:36 is my fav, but more drama in the song would pop this into 'hit-song' type
it is a good base for an awesome song, but as-is is a stock trance song. Get creative to introduce the different parts. Make it church-song easy to follow but two drunk grrls drama sounding lol. Good Luck.